It’s the Hook not the Book

I promised an update on my recent submission to the literary agent I met at Winchester last summer. She emailed to say she would like a chat over the phone. We subsequently spoke for about 30 minutes. She did not want to take the novel I had submitted to her. She felt it did not hit all the beats of a crime novel and whilst she had enjoyed it and thought the pacing, structure, characterisation and plot were all great, it was not stand out enough to be a break out novel in commercial fiction.

She said if I wanted to write an out and out crime novel she was certain I could do it she just wasn’t sure I wanted to which was very perceptive of her. I love writing about relationships. I particularly like writing about relationships when people from very different walks of life meet and sparks fly. I do not want to shift my focus away from that to hit the beats of a narrower brief.

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Whilst I was initially disappointed I quickly bounced back (you have to in this game!). Her words, however, got me thinking. In the trad world it is all about the hook and not the book. If the hook is strong enough that the marketing people can run with it you’re in and anything that does not hit that sweet spot is out, labelled as too much work. It’s all about the hook. A great hook can carry weaker writing across the line. That’s a fact of life in this modern world.

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Which leaves writers with a dilemma. It’s a choice artists have always had to make – do you chase the money or do you follow your love of your craft. It’s why Hollywood actors do one big picture for the studios and two independent films for themselves.

The competitive part of me wants to write the hell out of a crime novel now just to prove I can do it but crucially my heart wouldn’t really be in it. I write what I like and I wouldn’t want that to change that.

If you are lucky enough to write what you like and it also hits the sweet spot with the marketing people congratulations. You’ve hit the motherlode.

For the rest of us, I am pleased to say there is a silver lining to this tale. Indie publishing. Indie loves books that have hooks as much as trad publishing does but indie isn’t so narrow minded – cross genre, mash up or niche, indie welcomes them all and if you can devise a half decent marketing plan you might even find an audience as has been the case for me.

Indie gave me a home when no one else would and still does. Indie continues to cherish and reward me. Best of all, indie allows me to be myself and write what I want to write. Who can really ask for more?

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4 thoughts on “It’s the Hook not the Book

  1. A.M.Bradley 25/01/2018 / 3:15 pm

    Like most writers, I want to write a story I enjoy and hopefully, make some money from it. But if my heart wasn’t in the story, then I know I wouldn’t be able to write the book.

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    • ellieholmesauthor 27/01/2018 / 4:24 pm

      So true – that’s where I ended up. I have to write the stories that are in my heart. Good luck with your writing. Ellie x

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  2. juliecroundblog 29/05/2018 / 3:19 pm

    Advice was ‘write the book you would want to read.’ I’m not sure I could do that as I love Stephen King novels but I have been warned by an agent that my books aren’t commercial. I still find people who can’t wait for the next one!

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    • ellieholmesauthor 03/06/2018 / 3:53 pm

      It’s so difficult isn’t it? Real heart versus head territory. Ultimately, I think you have to write what makes you happy because if you write solely with the market in mind and you do find success you might find yourself trapped writing books which ultimately do not fill your soul with joy. Ellie x

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